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The Sonic PROject project(Creature name help)

Journal Entry: Sun Mar 9, 2008, 2:19 PM
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Okay so I already have a journal to this, but this project I'm ALOT more excited about then SAKA, ALOT more O_o

Looks like SAKA will have to be on hold for a while

But I'm in the middle of a storyline, and I want YOUR ideas to help me out!!!

I kinda have a feeling where this comic will take off at, and keep it going, but I want fillers that could spruce it up a bit.

Plus u remember the poll I put up? Depending on some of the ideas I get, I might feature extras, secondary charas, whatever. (I'll post more about it later.

I could also use a few comic designing pointers xDD I can't draw a cmoic page worth a crap, and if I did, I couldn't edit the wrongs.

So far I have 3 Chapters done

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I need help naming these creatures (as species, not an actual name like Sophie) and want your ideas!!!
So far I need help on the following

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I need help giving these creatures species names, and alot more are going to be added because right now, I have nothing.

So please help TT_TT

Alrighty, here's kinda a intro thingie:

Six of the seven Chaos Emeralds have been gathered as Sonic and his friends have been chased by the Dark, and the seventh one has finally been located at a floating temple called the Skyline Turret.

Sent to retrieve the Emerald, but with a serious condition, Espio flies to the turret with no idea his life is greatly threatened. After speaking to Sonic, and reaching the top of the temple to retrieve the Emerald, Sonic and the others were left to wonder if Espio was okay, or something has gone wrong.

Curious, Sonic flew himself to the turret, finding Espio's aircraft still there, and mysterious clues lurking around the temple. He strays to the top, not realizing what awaited him at the top, hunger for his blood. As soon as the hedgehog reaches to the top as the deadly rain continues to fall, he comes face to face with Espio's fate, suddeny his aircraft mysteriously destroyed, and no contact to the others.

This begins another Sonic adventure, but with a life-threatening killer stalking him every step of the way. This hedgehog not only has to save another world prarallel to his, but also be aware that this killer gets stronger with every drop of blood.

Thus, Mince's words repeat in Sonic's head, "The Silent Stalker has awakened..."


And I have to add a snippet of te story xDD *shot* but here it is.

The lightning struck around him, forcing the hedgehog to snap from the agony he saw right in front of him, forcing his mind to wake up and get back on guard. Without question, the hedgehog felt a small breeze brush against his back, reminding him of his gun, and spun around to grab it.

The gun was gone!

He froze stiff, he knew for sure his gun was right there. He growled lowly and stood back up, staring around slowly and uneasy. The rain beaten across his face soon made the skin numb, and his feet froze from the wetness and the wind, catching a faint glimpse in the corner of his eye of something moving. He spun around behind him towards the massive altar, seeing nothing, as the lightning lit it up, showing the dull crystals that gave no life.

It watched him, pacing around him, knowing his every move just by looking at him, it knew of his uneasiness, still crazed by the blood that was being washed away off of the stone. It continued to trot along the edge keeping its eyes upon Sonic, knowing his fear, and knowing this hedgehog will never expect it to sneak behind him, killing him. It was desprate, and quickly dove for the shadows just behind Sonic, and just before the hedgehog spun around again.

Sonic grew more scared, what was watching him? And where was it? He wanted to know, and he wanted lightning to light up the shadows. Sonic kept his stare towards the one spot he knew something was there, gripping his fists tightly as he stepped forward a few steps closer and stopped.

The lightning lit up its spot only once, laying low as the hedgehog was facing the otherway. Seeing the hedgehog was keeping his head forward, it started pacing to him. The lightning lit up the turret again, but its skin was practical camoflauge, there was so much wetness around, it could easily blend in if it shut its eyes. It stretched its mouth open, snarling faintly as it drew closer to Sonic, the fangs dribbling with desparation, its bones rippling through the skin as if it was paper, the sleakness showed it was fast, and its eyes glistened red through the rain.

A small rock bounced behind Sonic, not just startling it, but the hedgehog as well. Sonic jumped and spun around, and froze stiff as what he saw was the cause of Espio's death, matching his green distressed eyes with its glowing red eyes.



*hinthint* think of this as kinda a cross between Starfox Adventure (not Assault) and Sonic TH, only with a slight twist. *dundunduuuuun*

God I can just picture this as a game :excited: O.o!!!

---MTH

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Good story so far. It has a sort of charm to it and feel like it has potentials thus far. Unfortunately I don't have any real ideas on improving or advising, but so far it is showing strong possibilities.

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xDD thanx alot

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Page 8 added!

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Pleasure, best of luck with the project.

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Never be afraid to push it.

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